Friday, May 21, 2010

Over writting?

Okay, so we're doing a report on a famous dead person. I know sooo much about the mayflower pilgrims, so I'm doing William Brewster. Problem: I'm only in his early life and already have over two pages. At tis rate, when I'm done it'll be around 10-15. The teacher told us the max. amount of pages was 3 1/2. What do I do? I don't wanna cut stuff out...I really wanna show everyone what I know.

Over writting?
neglect the minor details. famous dead people somehow have a lot of minor details listed about them. (wonder y.. hehe)


put all the extra info into another folder and submit it for a bonus.


ur lucky by the way cuz a few months back i had a 15 page assignment to submit on Alexander the Great. at 5 pages i was finalizing it! then i had to put in details..


gluck
Reply:Just try to write more concise sentences. Don't put so much detail into everything. Just get the MAJOR points across and you will be fine =]
Reply:just try to sum it up to make it shorter with out taking stuff out!
Reply:oh ya well your face


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